书面表达要多使用较高级的词汇和较丰富的句式
在一篇书面表达中能有几个复杂结构和高级词汇，势必能提升文章的档次，得高分或者满分。因此书面表达要讲究表达的艺术，从用词到句型的选择，都必须避免千篇一律，比如：同义词、同义结构、反义词、反义结构、祈使句、疑问句、感叹句、简单句、复合句、倒装句、省略句、平行结构等，要有选择地恰当应用，提高得分档次。
（一）使用较高级的词汇
1. When he spoke more，he felt more excited.
→The more he spoke，the more excited he felt.
2. Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.
→Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.
3. We all think he is a great man. →We all think highly of him.
4. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. →A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.
5. Mr. Zhang taught us English. He was 44 years old. He wore long hair. His character was very strange.
（二）使用较丰富的句式
1. When he arrives，please give me an e¬mail.
→On his arriving，please give me an e¬mail.(使用v.¬ing形式)
2. To his surprise，the little girl knows so many things.→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句)
3. I'm weak，I'll make the effort.
→Weak as I am，I'll make the effort.(使用倒装句)
→Mr.Zhang,44 years old，used to be our English teacher of strange character with long hair.
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
(使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.
→I couldn't have passed the physics exam but for your help. (使用虚拟语气)
6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.
→Followed by many students，she walked out of the lab.(使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.
→Singing and laughing，they went back to school.( 使用v.¬ing形式)
8. I won't believe what he says.
→No matter what he says，I won't believe.(使用让步状语从句)
9. If you study hard，you will make rapid progress.
→Study hard and you'll make rapid progress.(用并列句)
10. Our school is beautiful.It is very large.It has 100 mu.And there are 3,500 students in it.Its staff
(员工)teaches and serves us well.
→Our beautiful large school in which there are 3,500 students covers an area of 100 mu，whose staff teaches and serves us well.(定语从句)
（三）使用恰当的连接词
逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇
时间顺序 first, second, then, finally/at last，soon，immediately，suddenly
空间顺序 here，there，on one side...on the other side，in front of，at the back of，next to
对称顺序 for one thing，for the other thing，on one hand，on the other hand
转折顺序 but，however，while，though，otherwise，in reality，instead
因果顺序 because，since，as，for thanks to，as a result(of)
条件顺序 as long as，on condition that，if，unless，only if
让步顺序 though，as，even if/ though，whether，wh¬(what，when，where，which，who，how) ever
递进顺序 and，what's more，besides，in addition，to make the matter worse，what's worse
过渡性插入语 I think，in my opinion，I'm afraid，you know，As we all know，As is known，in a word，to sum up
今年4月16号，北京的部分高校开展了校园开放日活动，你和你的父母前往一所你向往的大学参观咨询。请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，叙述你们这一天的活动及感受。
注意：1. .日记的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数100左右。
April 16 Saturday，Sunny
Today some universities were open to the public.
【参考范文1】
Nowadays_many_students_would_like_to_compare_themselves_with_others_not_only_in_study_but_also_in_life. In my opinion，comparing with other people is a good thing to us.Firstly，our society needs comparison to develop.Only when comparing ourselves with others can we know the aspects which we are weak in，then we'll make efforts to improve ourselves to a higher level. As an old saying says “Among any three people walking，I will find something to learn for sure. Their good qualities are to be followed，and their shortcomings are to be avoided”．Secondly，things are different from each other. Only through comparison，can we know the differences between us，and find the world is colorful. So it is advisable to compare ourselves with others.In this way，the society can be indirectly developed.
【解析】
本文是一篇议论文，议论文体在高考试题中并不是经常出现的题型，近三年内没有出现该文体的考查。尽管如此，高考命题中，除了应用文体外，一般所能考查到的就是议论文或记叙文两种文体了，我们并不能掉以轻心。议论文体的重点是论点鲜明、论据充分、必须有说服力，并能够按照要求在合理的范围内发挥合理的想象力，把自己的观点充分表达出来。
